
 I recommend both The Garden and The Prison to anyone who likes easy
listening, new age and classical (particularly The Garden). And for
anyone who likes a good, clean uplifting and spiritual story, these two
albums are for you.
I also recommend, from someone who has done it the other way, reading
The
Prison first, and then reading The Garden. There were a lot of things I
missed in The Garden that I didn't really catch until I read The Prison.
That is why I'm doing The Prison first.

-
Track One: "Opening Theme (Life the Unsuspecting Captive)"
- I generally
skip this song because I think Nesmith's vocals are a little too forced.
It seems to me he's trying just a little too hard to be a singer. Face
it, he's no Micky Dolenz, he doesn't have the commercial and versatile
voice like Micky has. Life the Unsuspecting Captive has incredible
lyrics, and kudos to Nesmith for the beauty of the entire song
instrumentally-but vocally, I'd rather hear Elton John or John Lennon on
this piece.
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Track Two: "Dance Between The Raindrops"
- I like this song-this is more
of the Nesmith-singing I'm used to. While the lyrics don't tie directly
to the story, I think it is fitting and a nice second track. The musical
backdrop of the song lifts the philosophical lyrics, and one particular
passage always strikes me (it's part of the chorus too) whenever I hear
it: "But there is no way in to where you already are and there is no way
out of everywhere. No satisfaction can come to that which is fulfilled
and the lies will fall away with the cares."
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Track Three: "Elusive Ragings"
- In the booklet, there are only four
sets
of stanzas for the lyrics, yet the song is drawn out for five full
minutes. That says something for the musicality of the song. It is a
Romantic (in terms of the Romantic Age) look at life and humanity, which
is, in all respects, the very same reality of the world Nesmith draws us
into at the opening of the story.
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Track Four: "Waking Mystery"
- I love this track as well, for it taps
into the ethereal aura which surrounds the Prison. And the first line of
the refrain, "Awake, behold, the morning's near" has inspired a poem I
wrote called Awake! Behold! (which, by the way, has been scrapped because
I could never match Nez's virtuosity with words and didn't much want to
be accused of plagiarism anyway!)
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Track Five: "Hear Me Calling? (You're Fine)"
- I generally skip this
song too, because it has the "plod-plod" feel of songs like "Twilight On
the Trail" and "Yellow Butterfly," which is too Country-Bumpkin Western
for me. The lyrics are also a little confusing. Don't get me wrong, I
can
appreciate a lyrical masterpiece when I see one, but the country-western
feel of this song just repulses me.
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Track Six: "Marie's Theme"
- This is my favorite of the bunch. There is
something about the gentle upbeat rhythm. I like the approach to Marie
in
the song, and how it appears to be sung from Jason's point of view of
Marie and Les. My favorite part is the repetition of "Hidden behind all
the logic one finds without truth" for about five or six minutes to the
music. I'm not normally one to like the repetition of a single line that
frequently, but on this particular time, I'm sold.
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Track Seven: "Closing Theme (Lamp-post)"
- Usually I'm not crazy about
this song because it comes right after my favorite track, so it's kind
of
like being someone who has to perform on the Ed Sullivan Show right
after
the Beatles the night Beatlemania struck US shores. The lyrics here are
so complex it just doesn't make a whole lot of sense. It's to the point
where I look at the lyrics, hear them, and just shrug. Nevertheless, it is a
fitting note to end on.

- CHAPTER ONE:
- I like the panoramic opening, the descriptions of the
main
characters (Les, Marie and Jason) and the Prison itself. It's a nice way
to orient the readers. I like the way Jason and Marie begin a silent
courtship, and when they do fall in love, it is as innocent as love
should be portrayed to be.
It is never mentioned why Jason or any of the others were sent to the
Prison in the first place. At first this threw me, because I like to
know
about a character's past, but as I read the story, I became aware of why
Nesmith gives you no hints into Jason's or Marie's pasts. It doesn't
matter what he did before he came, what matters are that he came to the
Prison and the subsequent actions he takes while he treks to find his
true self.
When Jason finally goes through the hole in the wall, I think that the
descriptions of the dimension he enters are phenomenal, and how Tom and
Janey come to help him, whilst letting him decide for himself what in
the
heck is going on. Jason shows his human side by demanding precise
answers,
which Tom and Janey give cryptic answers to. Jason eventually begins to
understand-though looking at where the Prison is and not seeing walls
would be a bit of a chunk to swallow for anyone.
I also like Jason's dedication to Marie, and his determination to come
back. And here is where Nesmith reinforces the idea that life is only
what you perceive it to be. If you think you see a Prison wall, then you
see it. If you don't think you see it, then it ceases to exist. That is
whole concept of the end of this first chapter. And when Jason sees the
wall when he knows he shouldn't can be construed as something of a
social
comment on peer pressure and the pressure on one individual to do and
think and be what is "normal", but to quote Peter Tork in the movie Head: "Who's
to
say what is normal?" Normalcy is just a perception, and in this part of
Chapter One, I believe Nesmith is trying to convey this whole idea,
particularly with this section of the chapter.
- CHAPTER TWO:
-
Jason manages to convince himself that the walls are not
there, and the walls disappear. This says something about his character
(which I believe is Nesmith's alter ego, rather than the character of his
son Jason).
His devotion to Marie is obviously reciprocated, for she finally admits
to Les that she is in love with Jason, and decides that she wants to be
with Jason, who does not want to be in the Prison anymore, walls or not,
so she agrees to follow him through the wall.
Her mistake is that while her heart belongs to Jason, she would rather
stay in the Prison if he did. She leaves through the hole in the Wall
only because she is going with Jason, not for the desire to be free of
the Prison walls.
The fact that Jason perceives a perfectly clear, cloudlessly starry
night where as Marie experiences much of the same horror and fear he
experienced when he first when through the hole gives a very vivid
insight into exactly what this dimension is that he has become a part
of.
It is less of a physical dimension, more of a spiritual and
psychological
dimension. And because Marie is not there of her own free will to be
free
but for her love for Jason, she does not experience the clarity, elation
and freedom that Jason had when the initial fear abated. Instead she
feels confused, frightened, and very uncertain. When Jason takes her to
see the Prison without walls, she sees it both ways, which gives perhaps
an insight into her personality--torn between wanting to believe what
she's told, and wanting to see what her eyes "should" see. To her, the
Prison is home, her safety grounds, and she wants only to go back.
Jason proves that being in this dimension has changed him by unselfishly
letting her go back, knowing he can love her just the same even if they
are not together and knowing that she is miserable anywhere but the
Prison. He takes his joy in knowing that he loves her.

In the end of The Prison, Nesmith really builds on the ideals of love and
pure love, how all it takes is to know one loves someone to be free. It almost
seems like a social comment against the old saying behind the Monkees song "Love
To Love". I applaud the theme of the last five pages of the story. As someone
who believes that love is more than just two people who always want to be
together, I really find an anthem in this whole story.
This album is Nesmith at his finest.


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